CC rough draft

I am not totally confident about the length of this draft even though it meets the minimum requirement of 1.5 pages. This is a very rough draft. The reason for it being so is because I wanted to make sure I was doing it right.


I have not addressed all objectives. I only gave an analysis for a part of one essay. I did not include a conclusion. So I need to add those.
My transitions suck also.


My peer will probably tell me that I need to analyze both articles fuller. They will most likely say that I need to add a conclusion and a "so what?"


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I'm surprised at how well he reviewed it. He gave some interesting feedback. I just need to lengthen my paper and finish it.