Applebaum and Wolfers

APPLEBAUM


Problems:
     -college students are going too far into debt to get an education
    -education is a right, not a commodity
    -college students will spend their whole lives paying back student debt instead of contributing to help the economy prosper


Proposal:
    -to take off 10 percent of debt every 10 years


Reasoning:
    -college students are our future for economic success


Evidence:
     -$1 trillion in student loan debt


I wanna know more of the specifics






WOLFERS


Problems:
    -he has lil' bitch syndrome

CC rough draft

I am not totally confident about the length of this draft even though it meets the minimum requirement of 1.5 pages. This is a very rough draft. The reason for it being so is because I wanted to make sure I was doing it right.


I have not addressed all objectives. I only gave an analysis for a part of one essay. I did not include a conclusion. So I need to add those.
My transitions suck also.


My peer will probably tell me that I need to analyze both articles fuller. They will most likely say that I need to add a conclusion and a "so what?"


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I'm surprised at how well he reviewed it. He gave some interesting feedback. I just need to lengthen my paper and finish it.

Logical fallacies in vid

name calling- war mongerer


false claims


generalization- how we feel as catholics


red herring- voting for john Kerry?